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Re: P.C. Marcs chapter 2
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Re: Ode to a mother
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Re: The Sunny Hobbs Project (1)
Hey, its IR here to review this story. I hope you find it helpful. I think the present tense is a blessing and a curse. It is very original and ...
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Re: Miss You Alot
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Re: The Wall
Hello, it's IR here to review your piece. I read through it, and enjoyed it. The one overall thing i felt was, an earning for more. Not like more of ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Short Story
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Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: a ride home (2)
This is the worst thing i've read in my whole life!!!!! Just kidding. Hey- It's skylar. Glad to see you've joined the society. Check out the rest of my writing ...
Oct 16, 2009 -
Re: Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers- part 2
HI, its IR to review this story. Its a pleasure, and i just realized that you were the one to review mine the last. (Fire Burns Deep) Ok, i haven't ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: A story that I am writing that currently has no name Pt 1.
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Oct 13, 2009 -
Re: Otherworld - Prologue (part 1)
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Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: It Ends Tonight
Hello. IR Ir here to review your poem. I really liked the Ipod idea. I don't know if its plagiarism or not but i doubt it. When You’re Around, I’m ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: my first post...
Hi its IR here. Its a pleasure to review your first poem!!! Poetry it really awesome by the way. The words themselves are brilliant. But some things to touch up ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Meetings, New Lords, and Well-Worn Swords
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Re: Green to White
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Re: The Janitors Prologue (Trash)
Hey. Its IR here to review. I hope you get something out of this. He ticked an objective: the only objective on the page that had not been ticked. i ...
Oct 5, 2009
